I believe the fourth episode of Bright Falls is named 'Local Flavor', rather than 'Animals': [1] (click on tab #4) - Carbon chicken 11:58, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
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Sorry, I was at school when writing it out. According to Machinima, it's called "Animals" and the Bright Falls website was blocked. Kranitoko 12:48, May 11, 2010 (UTC)